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Posted by mike at 12:59 pm on November 16th, 2008
Though I truly enjoyed Eragon and Eldest immensely, I found Christopher Paolini’s third novel in the Inheritance Cycle to be simply boring. If you have read this book and you feel otherwise, just ask yourself what actually happened? See if you can come up with three things that were actually crucial to Eragon’s development as a character or in preparing him for confronting Galbatorix. Be warned: Spoilers ahead.
Now, don’t get me wrong, the novel wasn’t terrible and I did enjoy parts of it. The problem is that I just kept falling asleep while I was reading. I mean those endless meetings with Nasuada, the trip to Farthen-Dur, and Orik’s fight for leadership just took up so much of the book that could have been used for something more interesting.
But let’s start with the beginning. I really did like Eragon and Roran’s battle at Helgrind to rescue Katrina. Even though Eragon and Roran’s chat was very awkward, the battle was great, that is until Eragon found Sloan. Sloan then became a 50 page waste of time. What was the point of this? To prove to the reader that Eragon can show good judgment? Dumb. Sloan should have just been dead so we could move on with the real plot.
Shortly after Eragon finally returns to the Varden camp, Murtaugh attacks with an army of magically enhanced soldiers that can feel no pain. I thought the battle was good, but I found Eragon and Murtaugh’s battle to be useless. Eragon let him go when he should have destroyed him. If nothing else, they should have at least killed the dragon.
So next, Nasuada decides to send Eragon off to help Orik attain command of the Dwarves. Meanwhile, Roran has married Katrina and left for battle with the Varden. He proves his prowess in his first two missions, but the third battle was just stupid. I just cannot believe that Roran could kill 200 men. Nor can I believe that 200 men would be stupid enough to face him individually when they had the Varden completely outnumber and had superior weaponry. I wonder if the Empire even would have considered…umm…just not attacking Roran. Perhaps they could have finished off the other forces and just surrounded Roran’s small force. I found this completely unrealistic. Not to mention that Roran may have saved his men, but he secured the death of all the others. He deserved to be whipped. His actions were very selfish and I was not impressed.
There isn’t much to be said about Farthen Dur. The little skirmish was entertaining, but considering that even Eragon was bored, I found myself skimming these chapters just to get through them.
By the time Orik won the throne, I began to wonder, what is this novel building up to? It didn’t feel like there was any building suspense. And when Eragon decided to fly off to Ellesmera, I knew it meant that the novel would have no major climax, that we would not see Eragon face Murtaugh or Galbatorix and it became hard to finish the book.
Ellesmera wasn’t particularly exciting either. Eragon spent an entire chapter smelting a new sword. Cool sword, but I would have been happier if Paolini had just described the process with a brief paragraph. We also found out that Oromis and Glaedir intended to go into battle alongside the Elves. I wonder if anyone didn’t see his death coming shortly thereafter.
Despite how boring I found most of the book. There was at least some small entertainment at the end. The Varden were beseiging Feinster (still not sure what strategic value it held) and Eragon arrived just in time to help break in, capture the leader, and take down a Shade. During the battle, Eragon also learned of Oromis and Glaedir’s deaths, which was surprisingly sad.
I think the thing that I found most frustrating with this book was that it just didn’t accomplish enough. So many things like Orik’s ascension didn’t need elaborate descriptions or Eragon’s aide. I really wanted to see Eragon face Galbatorix or some other big villain in an intense and climatic battle. I guess that was probably too much to ask for in three consecutive books. Judge for yourself, but I think you could skip this book and finish the series without missing much.